Chapter: 1 - Prologue

Page: 18

Title: Valkyrie

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Author's Notes

One of my Beta readers pointed out that I re-use certain shots A Lot, and after a small tantrum I realized they were right. So if you notice things getting more dynamic after Uncle's fight. That's why. My life partner actually told me a trick to check for Dynamism that's really easy, just go through and see if the head is a consistent size between panels. If the head always takes up the same amount of space on each panel, then you're probably not being dynamic enough in your pages.

I had a lot of fun with this one, playing with the lighting depending on the mood, the literal cloud and shadowed shroud that Claire is in. I also did a bit of reading on tea leaf reading which was fun.